PART 7
Flashes of bright light, streaming into my eyes. It was like I was in a whirlpool, going round and round, never ending. My head and body infliction like hell. Wait, I hear a sound, shouting, a office shouting my name.
Charlie? I answered groggily, Charlie! this time I was scared, whatsoeverthing didnt feel right.
My mass blurred, I stumbled to my feet.
Whoa, Easy there cowboy! I hear a voice and cringed when a pair of warm give grabbed and supported me gently and then everything went black.
When I regained consciousness and my lot I realized that I was tied on some sort of stretcher, my arm and leg bandaged tightly. I looked around, in the distance was the ship, all mangled and burnt.
I squeezed back the tears that were forming in my eyes. Trust me to wreck the ship, I thought bitterly, trying to swallow the pomposity in my throat.
Sudden movements to my right made me move my head. My heart halt beating. It was Charlie! She was being carried on a stretcher by Jason and the medical officer Derek. I could see only the bloodied hand hanging lifelessly from the side.
Charlie! I screamed, scared to death. I tried standing up, hardly to be only pushed down by the nurse Anita.
You contrive to rest she coaxed me firmly pushing me back down.
Noooo! I pauperization to see Charlie!!! I screamed fighting the straps that bounded me to the stretcher. I knew it. She was dead. It was my entire fault I thought horror-stricken, recalling the memories forwards the crash. I struggled harder, ignoring the suffer in my arm and leg.
I perceive Anita call over Derek and before I knew it I had blacked out again.
Bryan! Hey wake up!
I heard someone...
aha! yes... charlie LIVES! I enjoyed agency 7 of your story as more as the additions prior...
very descriptive and captivating when you leave us in suspense as u always do...
wholesome CMON work on part 8 ....
This seventh part of your exciting science fiction series got off to a suspenseful start. The lector can almost feel the perturb of the crash survivors. As in earlier parts, your dialogue is quite an effective in telling the story.
I noted in this part that you displayed much more of your descriptive abilities as, for example, when you describe the planet on which the craft crashed. Your words made it easy for the reader to visualize the planet.
You ended this part well with some mysteries to scold the readers imagination. It should be enjoyable to see how the mysteries unfold in the octet part of your intriguing fiction series.
THANK YOU FOR NOT KILLING CHARLIE! ok shes paralysed but theyre bound to have some kind of applied science to cure that no? like.. plz!! I hate you for making me an sneak to ur story! ;) Im looking forward to part 8!
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